Week 7 Show Not Tell

Emily overheard her sister Laura on the phone saying that they were going to the mall. Emily, ran into Laura’s room saying “Can I come? Can I come?”

Laura said  “NO you're too young you don’t know what you’re doing.” Suddenly Emily went storming out swearing at her and slammed the door on Laura's face. She locked herself in her room and started punching holes in the wall kicking things, around and then left, to calm down.Laura thought “Far man that girl is really spoilt and she wants to come with me?”

Emily felt nervous about asking to go to the mall. Emilys heart was pounding as she went in to Laura room her legs started wobbling as she was so nervous she felt like she was gonna pee her pants and when Emily asked to go to the mall with Laura she said “sure i'll take you out for the day”

Week 9 Show Not Tell

Mary started jumping up and down because her sister Jan was taking her to the mall. Jan was waiting inside her car while mary was looking for some fresh clothes in a bunch of dirty clothes.

It took about half an hour for mary just to get change by then Jan got very impatient with Mary. Jan started frowning and said “How long is that girl gonna be?”if Mary had came out but every time Jan looked out she wasn’t coming. Jan got very very angry, then started beeping the horn and started shouting at her to hurry up.  

Mary was nervous to go to the mall with Jan, when she asked she said “Jan can I please come with you to the mall? As she asked Mary, Jans legs started shaking because she was so nervous. She was so nervous but when she heard a yes from Mary she just shocked with excitement started jumping up and down until she ran out of breath to be happy anymore. When they got into the car she kept on saying thank you over and over again until they reached the mall.

Fiafia Night

On Wednesday the 9th of April we had our school fia fia. When I got to school the smell of fresh  delicious food shot straight up my nose.There  were about 3 and a half thousand people there. “Brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrring”rang the bell to tell us that we had to go to our changing rooms to get changed and get ready. When I got to the library I saw the people that were in the kapa haka junior and in the kapa haka senior groups.  The groups that I was in was senior kapa haka and senior hip hop.

The feeling just before walking out onto the stage. It feels like theres butterflies flying around in my stomach. As I walk out on to the stage all I can see is people sitting and standing in the crowd. As we finish our first song the crowd starts clapping and then we finish our performance and a little group of people get up and start doing a haka.

After the kapa haka senior group finished the kapa haka junior had their  performance. When the junior kapa haka group was performing I had to quickly run back to the library and get changed and get ready for my senior hip hop group because the Bollywood group was just before the senior hip hop.

When the Bollywood finished it was my turn again as the music started playing the senior hip hop group started walking on to the stage saying sup to each other then it began we started dancing then we had to run to the back of the minions and then we started dancing to happy.

Then the rest of the groups finished it was time to go back to the changing rooms. My two favourite groups was the senior samoan and jump jam.